Niall's English Blog
Friday, 7 December 2012
iPad rules!
1) do not take photos.
2) do not throw the iPad at someone.
3) close cover when asked.
4) do not run with iPad.
5) handle iPad with care.
6) don't take it of other people.
7) do not steel the iPads.
8) no videos.
9) no YouTube.
10) do not beat the iPad.
Friday, 12 October 2012
127. hours
Wednesday, 3 October 2012
£1.74
With £1.74 I would buy my daily essentials .....
I would buy a litre bottle of water for 49p from home bargains. That leaves £1.25 left. Then I would buy a large portion of chips from gui garden for £1.20 and that leaves me 5p towards my next meal. Then wen I need my shelter and sleep I would have to crash under the shelter next to Morrisons. With £1.74 I would buy my daily essentials .....
I would buy a litre bottle of water for 49p from home bargains. That leaves £1.25 left. Then I would buy a large portion of chips from gui garden for £1.20 and that leaves me 5p towards my next meal. Then wen I need my shelter and sleep I would have to crash under the shelter next to Morrisons.
Sunday, 16 September 2012
tension creaters
Tension Creators!
In the
opening paragraph the writer does a great job of creating tension He shows this
by writing ‘I lolled on the rope, scarcely available to
hold my head up’. This created tension by making you imagine what it was like to
be there.
The fears that Joe Simpson displays in his time of anguish increases the tension it creates a desicion between life and death of him and his partner whilst hanging off the edge of a 50 foot cliff. pity and weariness are words of his emotions.
The fears that Joe Simpson displays in his time of anguish increases the tension it creates a desicion between life and death of him and his partner whilst hanging off the edge of a 50 foot cliff. pity and weariness are words of his emotions.
In Touching the Void Joe Simpson creates tension by exaggerating. There was no need for the torture. This
creates tension by showing that he is so anxious for the torture and pain he is feeling must end.
by niall teaney
and mr howard you really need to watch this clip:
http://youtu.be/9bZkp7q19f0 - enjoy . gangnam style - psy
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