Tension Creators!
In the
opening paragraph the writer does a great job of creating tension He shows this
by writing ‘I lolled on the rope, scarcely available to
hold my head up’. This created tension by making you imagine what it was like to
be there.
The fears that Joe Simpson displays in his time of anguish increases the tension it creates a desicion between life and death of him and his partner whilst hanging off the edge of a 50 foot cliff. pity and weariness are words of his emotions.
The fears that Joe Simpson displays in his time of anguish increases the tension it creates a desicion between life and death of him and his partner whilst hanging off the edge of a 50 foot cliff. pity and weariness are words of his emotions.
In Touching the Void Joe Simpson creates tension by exaggerating. There was no need for the torture. This
creates tension by showing that he is so anxious for the torture and pain he is feeling must end.
by niall teaney
and mr howard you really need to watch this clip:
http://youtu.be/9bZkp7q19f0 - enjoy . gangnam style - psy
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